I think I pass my exams successfully. I wish you goodluck so I have to go.

Irina

Количество слов:_____________

Решение коммуникативной задачи (К1) Максимальное количество баллов - 3
Выполнено ли задание полностью, а именно: а) даны ли ответы на три заданных в письме вопроса?     б) правильно ли выбраны обращение, за­вершающая фраза и подпись?   в) есть ли благодарность за полученное письмо, упоминание о будущих контактах?	Вывод:

Организация текста (К2) Максимальное количество баллов - 2
а) логично ли выстроен и разделен на абзацы текст?   б) правильно ли использованы языковые средства для передачи логической связи?   в) соответствует ли оформление текста нор­мам письменного этикета?	Вывод:

Лексико-грамматическое оформление текста (К3) Максимальное количество баллов - 3
а) использованы ли разнообразная лексика и грамматические структуры, соответству­ющие поставленной коммуникативной зада­че?     б) каково количество языковых ошибок, не затрудняющих понимание?   в) каково количество языковых ошибок, затрудняющих понимание?	Вывод:
Орфография и пунктуация (К4) Максимальное количество баллов - 2
a) Каково количество орфографических и пунктуационных ошибок в письме? б) Затрудняют ли эти ошибки понимание текста?	Вывод:

Общая оценка за письмо: __________________

 

 

Вопросы для самоконтроля. 1. Каковы действия эксперта, если объем письма 85 слов; 90 слов; 122 слов, 135 слов? 2. Каким образом считается «дата»? 3. В каких случаях учащийся может получить «0 баллов» по критерию «Решение коммуникативной задачи»? Продолжается ли проверка письма по другим критериям в этом случае? 4. Какие завершающие фразы могут быть использованы в личном письме? 5. Каким образом текст письма может быть разделен автором на абзацы? 6. Каковы нормы оформления личного письма в соответствии с письменным этикетом, принятым в странах изучаемого языка? 7. В каком случае учащийся может получить максимальный балл по критерию «Лексико-грамматическое оформление текста»? 8. На какие пунктуационные ошибки эксперту необходимо обратить внимание?

Тема 2. Примеры экзаменационных работ для самостоятельного анализа

В этом разделе даны задания, которые можно оценить самостоятельно, используя в качестве справочного материала таблицу критериев оценивания, и дополнительную схему оценивания (приложение 1).

I. Первый блок экзаменационных материалов для самостоятельного оценивания представляет собой письма-ответы учащихся на тестовое задание, которое было представлено в теме 1.

You have 30 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your English–speaking pen friend, Ben. I’m very busy preparing for my school exams in Literature and History. To pass them successfully, I have to remember a lot. … What subjects have you chosen for your exams and why?... What type of exam do you prefer – oral or written? …How do you prepare for exams? …   Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions. Write 100 – 120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

 

Письма для самостоятельного оценивания

Текст 4 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

 

16/4 Panpherova

Moscow

13 December 2014

Dear Ben,

I chosen English and History for my exams because I like History, this must for my future profession, English must because this subject very important in our peace. I think oral exam lighter than written. I will employ coach or writting tests in internet.

Sorry, I am going for a walk with my dog.

With love,

Tanya.

 

Текст 5 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

 

Moscow, Russia

06.12.2014

Dear Ben,

Thank you for the letter. How are you? What's new? i at school will have examinations. i have over the literature and history. i very busy, because i read books and i learn tickets. i have not enough free time on rest. i am tired because of examinations.

i have chosen for this purpose biology and history. i handed over oral subjects because it is necessary to learn them only on your place. I would take on Library of the book and prepared for examination in textbooks or read in the internet.

So, i finish the letter. Well, i'd better get going.

Good-bye Ben

Pavel

You have 30 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your English–speaking pen friend, John.   … I like summer because I can give as much time as I want to my hobby – reading. I know it sounds strange nowadays. Why do teenagers read less than their parents did? What kind of books do you like reading? What do you do in your free time?... Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions. Write 100–120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

 

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85/5/80 Leninskiy avenue

Moscow

13 December 2014

Dear John,

I like your hobby. Summer is the best time for reading/ You have enough time, nobody interrupts you, you don't have have to worry about your homework.

Teenagers read less than their parents did because teenagers have new technologies: TVs and computers, PSPs and gameboys, etc... But not all teenagers read a little. I know many people that love reading but not what we are studying at school.

I like reading fantastics and novels. I like imagine our “another” life with wonders. That's why I'm reading fantastics.

In my free time I'm doing different things. One day I'm playing on the computer, another day I'm watching TV. Sometimes I'm taking a walk with my friends or my dog, sometimes I'm trying to solve Rubic's cube.

Write back soon.

With love,

Irina

Текст 7 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

 

Himki

Russia

07.12.2014

My Dear John,

Hello. I am glad to hear you. How are the things going on? Did some thing new happen in your life. Having received your letter, I want to answer it immediately. But I was working a lot during the last two weeks.

Teenagers read less then their parents because it aren't interested in it. My most favourite book – Dorian Gray (Oscar Uaild). I like to walk in the free time.

What your most favourite book? Why are you like to read? Are you satisfied with all this? What are your plants for this summer? Maybe we will be able to meet one day?

With impatience I look forward to hearing.

Your very sincere

friend Victoria

 

Текст 8 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow

Russia

08.12.2014

Dear John,

Thanks for your letter. I'm sorry that I haven't written for a long time.

You say that you like read, I also like read and I think that it doesn't sounds strange nowadays. You are right that teenagers read less than their parents did, because teenagers have others interests such as TV, internet, games, they like go for awalk. In my free time I read, I like different books.

So I have to go. See you later.

Liza

Текст 9 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow, Russia

06.12.2014

Dear John,

Thank you very much for your letter. Sorry for not writing for a long time. I very much respect you that your hobby is reading books. In now days its very rare/ Usually teenager's spend time at the computer. It's big problem teenagers in the world.

More teenagers never read book, because bad developed speech. Fairly I'am don't like read books.

But I like to read such great writers Pushkin, Lermontov, Tolstoy, Gogol. Their books very interesting. Usually spend I'am free time in the street and at the computer. In the street I like for a walk with my friends or play football. At home I like watching TV and play with my sister.

Anyway, that's all for now! Write and tell me your news!

Maxim.

Текст 10 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow, Russia

06.12.2014

 

Dear John,

Thank you very much for your letter. Sorry for not writing for a long time. How are you doing? As in school? Recently, in literature class, we talked about that. modern students are very little read, develop their communication. Now, reading books is a rarity. We agreed that the wine around the art technology children sit on theinternet all day and did not have eneugh time to do homework. But personally, I very much like to read. Recently I read “Dead Souls”, “Thunderstorm” and the novel “Evgene Onegin”. These books made me a very big impression. I advise you to read them.

Sorry I have to go, my mum is waiting for me.

Dima

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Moscow

Russia

December 12^th

Dear John,

Hi! It was great to hear from you again.

In your letter you ask me about my studies in my free time, about my favourite books for reading. So, I can tell you that in my free time I like to walk with my friends, play with my dog.

I like to read many different books, but my favourite book is “Homeless Dogs”. This book was written by Christopher Adamas. And you? Do you like reading? Do you write me about your favourite author and his book? Can you give me this book?

Best wishes,

Ulyana

 

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Moscow

Russia

December 2014

Dear John,

Hello! I was so happy to get your letter! I like summer too. In summer i riding on the bike, swimming in the river. Teenagers are not very interesting in read because they are ussualy plays in computer. I like reading books about historic events, fantastic planets. In my free time i collecting postcards. It's very interesting. I have 150 postcards. What kind of books do you like reading? How many books you read at the summer? I need to help my mother.

See you soon,

Tim

You have 30 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your English–speaking pen friend, Andrew.   … My brother sent his best photos to a young photographers' competition and won a camera. It was cool! I'll try my luck one day too. What kind of competition would you like to take part in? What prize would you like to win? Do you think participating in competitions is worth the time and effort, why? Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions. Write 100–120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

Текст13 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow

Russia

08.12.2014

Dear Andrew,

Thanks for your letter. Sorry that I haven't written to you for a long time.

You asked me about my favourite type of competitions well. I am fond of dancing, so I often take part in dancing competition. It seems to me very interesting and thrilling. The form of a prize I would like to receive an invitation from dancing school. But I must work hard and be patient. As for you, what's your hobby? How are you going to take part in competitions? And would you like to take part in photographers competition as your brother?

Sorry, but I have to finish the letter. I must do my homework.

Love,

Vika

Текст 14 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow, Russia

06.12.2014

Dear Andrew,

Thank you very much for you Letter. Sory for not writing for a long time. Yes, I heard about this competition. These competition are very interesting to me. But I'm going to participate in other competition, it's called “The best hair of my pet”. There will be many different animals, from hamsters to dogs. The most important to show imagination, as well as to treat with humour. I'll take my cat, his many is Ozzy, he is grey colour, he have dark green eyes, he is fluffy and soft. He is very beautiful, so I hope to win the competition. 3 winners will receive medals and gifts for the animals, all the other charters. This is not a waste of time.

Love,

Julia

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Moscow, Russia, 8.12.2014

Dear Andrew,

Thanks for your letter. It was lovely to hear from you. You asked me about what kind of competition would I like to take part in and what prize would I like to win? I want to competition of beauty. Also I want to comic competition and I want to competition of talents. I am beauty and clever, because I can to win to competition of beauty. Also I am dancer. I like to dance. My friends and others like to watch when I dance, because I want to competition of talents. I would like phone. I want pink phone. Also I want to win white and thin netbook.

Sorry, that I haven't written to you for along time.

Love...

Nastya.

 

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Moscow, Russia

06/12/2014

Dear Andrew,

How are you? Thank you very much for your letter. Sorry for not writing for a long time. I was very busy. Because I sent my best photos to a Russian photographers' competition, too.

I would like to be a photographers and I need photographers' competition. I think it's very interesting and special for me, because my grandfather was photographers too. Many yars ago, when I was yong I had a dream. It was expensive camera “Polaroid”. I hope I would like to win money and buy this camera. What about time? No I think different competitions develop people and its very interesting.

Anyway, that's all for now! Write and tell me your news!

Vlad

 

Текст 17 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow

Russia

December 13^th

Dear Andrew,

Thanks for your letter. I am glad that your brother won a camera.

In your letter you ask me about competitions. Well, I would like to take part in FIBA. It is very important event in life of sportsmen. And, of course, I want to win he 1^st place and MVP. MVP ia a prize which get the best player in competition.

I think participating in competitions is worth the time and effort because it is very interesting, more than that is healthy.

Now, I going to play basketball.

Love,

Mary

 

Текст 18 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow

Russia

12 December 2014

Dear Andrew,

Hi Andrew! How are you? I'm fine. Thanks for you last letter. I am very glad for you brother.

In the letter you asked me about competitions. I would like to participate in competitions on chess. I would like to win a trip on the sea. I think participating in competitions is worth the time and effort, because it is very interesting.

I went to cinema in 3 december and looked very good film. It was terrible, but interesting film. What film looked you? Do you like they? If like, that why?

In next week I going to the country and dont have write you, but I come back very soon!

Yours,

Olga

Текст 19 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow

Russia

12 December 2014

Dear Andrew

I have just got your letter. I'm very happy vor your brother. It was cool!

I would like sport competition. I want to take part in competition. It's interesting. I want to win a gold medel or silver medеl. I think that participating in competitions is worth the time and effort because you must achieved myself aim.

And you? Do you want to take part in competition? What prize would you like to win? You think participating in competitions is worth the time and effort, don't you?

Write back soon. Tell me all about you and your brother.

Take care,

Alex

Текст 20 (личное письмо учащегося с сохранением языкового оформления)

Moscow

Russia

14 December 2014

Dear Andrew,

Thank you for your letter. It was great to hear about your brother.

As for me I would like to take part in singer competition. I would like to win the journey in Paris but my favourite country is London.

I think that participating in competitions is your vitally important effort. It is not worth the time because you win a lot of prizes. Sometimes we are not lucky but we must try to win anything.

I wish you will try your luck one day too and won anything. Write soon!

Good luck,

Sabrina

 

 

Приложение 1. Дополнительная схема оценивания задания 33

ФИО эксперта_____________________________ Код эксперта ____________________

НОМЕР УЧАСТНИКА ОГЭ
1. Содержание	Ссылка на предыдущие контакты, благодарность за полученное письмо
Ответ на 1 вопрос
Ответ на 2 вопрос
Ответ на 3 вопрос
Объём высказывания соответствует поставленной задаче (100–120 слов)
Обращение (неофициальный стиль)
Завершающая фраза (неофициальный стиль)
Подпись (только имя)
ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ (максимальный балл – 3)
2. Организация	Логичность текста, деление на абзацы
Средства логической связи
Обращение на отдельной строке
Завершающая фраза на отдельной строке
Подпись на отдельной строке
Адрес автора в правом верхнем углу
Дата под адресом
ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ (максимальный балл – 2)
3. Лексико-грамматическое оформление текста (максимальный балл – 3)
4. Орфография и пунктуация (максимальный балл – 2)
ИТОГО

[1] http://slovardalja.net/word.php?wordid=26089

[2] Новые государственные стандарты школьного образования по иностранному языку 2–11 классы – М.: ООО «Издательство Астрель»; ООО «Издательство АСТ», 2004, с.77–78.

[3] При оценивании письма написание названия города и страны на одной строке (краткий адрес) не считается ошибкой. Ошибкой является «неправильный» порядок следования элементов адреса (независимо от их расположения по строкам), например, Russia, Murmansk.

[4] http://standart.edu.ru